It gets extremely annoying whenever said villain keeps making repeat appearances though. As if the hero somehow believes that this time the prison that's failed to hold them two or three times already will somehow keep them contained.
Now I'm wondering though what type of heroine do others prefer?
As for me. Well I have trouble answering that question. I rather like extremely energetic personalities that are very cuddly like Maria's. However, I also find myself quite interested in a lady with a very cold or business like demeanor.
I could enjoy a heroine laughing with glee as she rips apart a villain giving said villain a taste of the terror and feeling of helplessness they've caused others. Letting them experience the feeling of helplessness that comes with being at someone's mercy and knowing they'll receive none.
This isn't a delight derived purely from the villains pain though but a deep feeling of pleasure brought on by the knowledge that by removing this threat she's protecting a great many people.
That said I could also enjoy seeing them being hacked up by a lady with a cold demeanor as well. No laughter, no sympathy or anger. Rather they find them face to face with someone who simply sees them as a diseased animal that needs put down. That or perhaps even regards them as dangerous waste that needs removed. They're not even a toy to her just something to be rid of.
One thing is clear though and I imagine anyone who's read my writing realizes this. I prefer a heroine who isn't afraid to get her hands bloody.
So what type of heroine do you all prefer?




Though I make the assumption that English is not your first language. Though you have mastered it very well. Very well indeed.
All I can say it that with your level of writing. I sincerely hope you can get something published. As so you can spend your full time writing, not just as a hobby. Assuming of course that this has not yet already happened.
With those things said. I would really hope that you are working on a third "Chapter" to "The Unyielding Hunger". For it is a fantastic story and read.
May many blessings and good fortune be bestowed upon you and your loved ones. I wait in anticipation of your further writings.
Na, this isn't a career for me. I'm nearly to my final year of college to become a biomedical engineer. Though I"m glad you've enjoyed the story.
At this moment I'm not working on the third chapter but rather I'm working on a super fem story. Once I finish the current chapter of the chains she chose I'll begin work on unyielding hunger once again.
Thanks for the feed back and I'll try not to keep everyone waiting too long but I'm not going to rush chains.
Yet I really don't expect you to finish the next chapter till the end of July or August based on how you have posted in the past. Also it is always bad to rush art. As it only serves to dilute the quality.
All and all your grammar and spelling is pretty darn good. Just a few errors that are constant through out make me think that English was not your first language.
Honestly you already write just about in Novel style. If you really got maybe to chapter six or seven in the story. I would consider sending it to publications. See if they would publish it.
Even if you only ever publish one book. It would be one hell of a way to pay off your college loans if nothing else. Then again Biomedical Engineer is not really a low paying gig either.
I mean you have already written so much. It is pretty much in a form a publisher would look at. Aside from fixing the minor grammar errors, it really is novel quality work.
I dunno, I just like to see talented people who can apply a skill get paid for it. Even if it is just a hobby. On the other hand I can understand the pain people feel when a hobby becomes "Work" and the fun it takes out of it.
All I can say is that I hope for your sake you have a both hard copy and digital copy saved that is not on DA. As DA, likes to delete accounts on a semi-random basis. It would be a shame for you to lose what you had cause DA had a mood swing.
Hm sending something of mine in to a publisher to be reviewed is tempting in some ways. I wouldn't know where to send it though and from the little I've looked into it seems like just the submission is a lot of work.
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